In the example, you'd need to do a revised draft to submit to your editor.

在例子里，你需要做一个修订好的草稿给你的编辑。

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The revised draft is the version which will be graded.

重写的草稿才是评分的依据。

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Capitalized terms used but not otherwise defined herein have the meanings set forth in the Revised Draft Registration Statement.

除在本文件中另有规定外，英文首字母大写术语拥有上市申请登记表草案下定义的含义。

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The revised draft design thus featured a list of courses for both undergraduate and post-graduate levels, a brief description of each course and an outline of fundamental journalism competencies.

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The Technical Secretariat of ICHAD has planned to submit the Revised Draft of Curriculum to Education Material Approval for Printing Committee (EMAP) of the Ministry for final approval in July 2012.

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He wanted to know whether there would be a further period of consultation once the revised draft of the framework was published, as well as a vote in Parliament on the proposals.

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