Your essay needs (a) structure.
你这篇文章组织不好。
这篇文章满篇皆是引语。
She got top marks for her essay.
她的论文得了最高分。
The essay was appallingly written.
这文章写得一塌糊涂。
This essay is just not good enough.
这篇散文实在是不够好。
My essay is practically finished now.
我的论文现在差不多写完了。
Her essay is full of spelling mistakes.
她的文章到处都是拼写错误。
The essay represents a solid week's work.
这篇文章是用整整一星期写出来的。
He sat bashing away at his essay all day.
他一整天都坐着不停地写文章。
Your essay does not address the real issues.
你的论文没有论证实质问题。
Not enough thought has gone into this essay.
这篇文章很肤浅。
The essay was a meaningless jumble of ideas.
这篇散文思想混乱，使人不知所云。
She was asked to judge the essay competition.
她被邀请担任散文比赛的评委。
Your essay is littered with spelling mistakes.
你的文章里到处是拼写错误。
The essay contains a number of factual errors.
文章中有一些与事实不符的错误。
She made several minor amendments to her essay.
她对自己的论文作了几处小的修改。
You should include some examples in your essay.
你应该在文章里举一些例子。
This essay will have to be completely rewritten.
这篇文章得全部重写。
It's time I got down to thinking about that essay.
我该认真思考一下那篇论文了。
Could you cut your essay from 5 000 to 3 000 words?
请把你的文章从5 000字删减至3 000字好吗？
The essay was cobbled together from some old notes.
这篇文章是用以前的一些笔记胡乱拼凑而成的。
You should draw up a plan or outline for the essay.
你应该为文章草拟个计划或提纲。
I must finish this essay today. I'm going out tomorrow.
我今天一定要完成这篇论文，因为我明天要出去。
Choose an essay topic that you can really get your teeth into.
选择一个你可以真正悉心钻研的论文题目。
I had time to do a quick edit of my essay before handing it in.
我呈交论文之前有点时间，很快地校订了一遍。
Quotations should be used to make points, not to pad the essay.
引语应该是用来陈述观点的，而不是为了拉长文章。
Given my druthers I'd rather write an essay than draw a picture.
如果我可以选择的话，我会写一篇论文，而不是画一幅画。
The points you make are fine, but the whole essay lacks coherence.
你提出的论点很好，但整篇文章缺乏呼应连贯。
I have to finish this essay today. We have to hand them in tomorrow.
我今天得完成这篇论文，因为我们明天必须交。
You're going to have to do a lot more work on this essay before it's presentable.
你的这篇文章还得多加润饰才能交得出手。
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